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I'm screaming!
Do you hear me?

I SAID I'M SCREAMING!

I'm screaming for a reason.
So listen up
I'm tired of being patient.

I'm tired.

Sick
and
Tired


I was that one that was polite.
I was that one that was quiet.
I was that one sitting in the corner hoping to be notice as I strived for improvement.

No more.
Why?
BECAUSE I'M SICK AND TIRED OF WAITING
So  I'm going to scream. Shout. Whatever I have to do to be noticed.

If I stick with fate I'll just have a dull and boring life.
No more
I SAID NO MORE
SO LISTEN THE FUCK UP.
AND LOOK AT ME!
I'M TIRED OF BEING INVISIBLE


So I'm going to scream.
Maybe you can do me a favor and notice before my voice gives out.

Oh and Destiny.
Fuck you.
Should I say more?
Maybe I should get a megaphone.
You should hear me better then.
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is how I feel every single day. But I'm tired of yelling now. Tired of trying to be heard
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BurningBite Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sometimes when you become silent, people notice that something is different and then try to figure it out.
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I love this so much. Please, make more poems. I love them
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BurningBite Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh thank you. I tend to write poetry when I'm really emotional but I'll try and write more.
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saltwaterlungs Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As do I.
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lilgloomy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
<3
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Purplefairydust Featured By Owner May 12, 2012   Writer
This is fantastic :)
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you
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Flopsydabunny Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow this is great. Trust me, I'm not ignoring you now. Seriously. For some reason I just love this.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks >//<
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Flopsydabunny Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student General Artist
np it's really expressive and badass :3
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margierules Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this. You are awesome :D
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
>//< Thank you!
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Munchkin1616 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Love it.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Woo, yeah! I can hear you now. :) I especially liked "hoping to be noticed as I strived for improvement". Does strike some string in me. :)
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks X3 I've notice a lot of people saying that they can relate to it.

I think that was actually one of my favorite lines to since for me its pretty literal since in class I sit in the corner and draw all the time.
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RoseThorn1313 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Fantastic!!! And so true.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks
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CallMeAlice23 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Nice very very nice! Very expressive and many many people can relate to your poem, myself included, and my..interesting friend, Hayden ^^
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you like it and that you can relate
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AxisofDarkness Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Great work this is excellent you have a talent. Just remember we make are own destiny.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you. And I'll remember its just keeping up the courage will be my problem.
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JayElleBee Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Damn.

Normally I hate poetry, but that was kinda badass. And put into a words a lot of what I've been feeling recently. :D Nice work.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you like it
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CloudySkyes Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
Wonderful! I like the comment at the bottom, nice touch :P
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks you. Yeah I was just going to put "..." at the bottom but then that came out
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VampsandHumanoids Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*High Five* You know what? No one deserves to feel like this, and you go! Don't let anyone push you around; I'm so proud you're taking your life in your own hands. Not many people have the guts to so it! :iconclappingplz:
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
*high fives* Thanks X3 Now lets hope I can keep that attitude and not wimp out
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jesd2 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
I understand. :/ I have tried to write a poem like this but I could just never get the words down.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I find it easiest to write something like this whenever I feel that emotion the most, like while I was writing this I was bout to punch a wall but now that I'm calm I'm sitting here looking at this going "How the fuck did I write that?"
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jesd2 Featured By Owner May 8, 2012
Aww XD yeah poems are best written like that.
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crazy-melody Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
those words hurted me, threw me across the room, because....unfortunately thatīs so true ;v;
thanks... it causes a major impact :) and i loved it.
oh, by the way...
Iīll listen to you ;)
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you like it. I've been seriously considering picking up writing again and I think you comment pushed me even closer to starting up again. Thanks for listening ^.^
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crazy-melody Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe, well thatīs good to hear :) Iīll continue watching what you write, so i hope you do :)
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks X3
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Fierce-diddi Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for writing this. It describes me so much right now.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Does it really?
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Fierce-diddi Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes. extremely. cuz I want to start a band like the black Veil Brides and unite, redeem and free the broken, but very few people I know believe I can do it and just brush me off. My mom doesnt believe in me, people dont hear me anymore, they think im crazy. I know what i need to do though.
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BurningBite Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Then do it. Push forward and prove them wrong. Set your eyes on your goal and don't stop till you reach it, and when you do reach it go even farther.
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Fierce-diddi Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you. so much. <3
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